If you post the other two I'll go over them all and then decide.

Pokemon Fill out:
Name: Modomancer
Relation to other pokemon~
Evolution: Yes
If Yes, Evolve how: When the flame on its tail is lit in the prescence of a sun stone. Must have one person whom it would give its life for or else the above method will fail.
Moves it can learn: Flaresphere (Like an aura sphere with fire)
Special Ability: Fire Resistance. Is extremely weak against water, but incredibly durable to fire attacks.
Appearance: A pure red Komodo dragon with a brighter flame, larger wings, sharper fangs, and slightly more muscle than a Charizard. The flame on its tail is not lit, but his normal moves are the same as most fire types at this stage.
Pokedex Entry Text: Modomancer: A Dragon Poke'mon. Has larger wings than a Charizard, the flame on its tail (When lit) is white hot, and can purify metal. A very helpful trait in Poke'mon centers where needle sterilization is necessary. Is very non-aggresive to balance out its stronger body.
Average Height: 4' 1"
Average Weight: 50 Lbs

Pokemon Fill out:
Name: Komodomon
Relation to other pokemon~
Evolution: Yes
If Yes, Evolve how: When the flame on its tail is extinguished in the prescence of a sun stone. Must have one person whom it would give its life for or else the above method will fail.
Moves it can learn: Super Flaresphere (A larger Flaresphere)
Special Ability: Fire Resistance. Is extremely weak against water, but incredibly durable to fire attacks.
Appearance: A pure red Komodo dragon with a brighter flame, larger wings, sharper fangs, and slightly more muscle than a Modomancer. The flame on its tail is finally lit, but his normal moves are the same as most fire types at this stage.
Pokedex Entry Text: Komodomon: A Dragon Poke'mon. Has larger wings than a Modomancer, the flame on its tail is white hot, and can purify metal. A very helpful trait in Poke'mon centers where needle sterilization is necessary. Is very non-aggresive to balance out its stronger body.
Average Height: 6' 2"
Average Weight: 100 Lbs

Pokemon Fill out:
Name: Modoragon
Relation to other pokemon~
Evolution: No
If Yes, Evolve how:
Moves it can learn: Flare Bullets (A barrage of smaller, faster Flarespheres (Like a shotgun) )
Special Ability: Fire Resistance. Is extremely weak against water, but incredibly durable to fire attacks.
Appearance: A pure red Komodo dragon with a brighter flame, larger wings, sharper fangs, and slightly more muscle than a Komodomon. The flame on its tail is lit, and his normal moves are the same as most fire types at this stage.
Pokedex Entry Text: Komodomon: A Dragon Poke'mon. Has larger wings than a Komodomon, the flame on its tail is white hot, and can purify metal. A very helpful trait in Poke'mon centers where needle sterilization is necessary. Is very non-aggresive to balance out its stronger body.
Average Height: 8' 0"
Average Weight: 500 Lbs

Ok, Um...

Accepted exept for moves.

I'll make a Technique creation sheet, because, making up moves is an entirely different thing.

So basically three of the same pokemon, except bigger, get accepted with catch, but my two different pokemon don't even get criticism. That's just wrong, man.

I sent him a PM on ways to change them, these are going to be accpeted if he changes the move thing, and goes by the changes I sent in a PM.


As for your two.


I just don't like them.

Added Attack Suggestion form.

FUN!

Name: santon
Relation to other pokemon~
Evolution: No
Will Evolve: Yes
If Yes, Evolve how: sanron
Type: Water
Moves it can learn: water pulse, Attract, taunt, Hydro pump, surf, waterfall, water sport
Special Ability: ice resistance...extremely weak against fire
Appearance: looks kind of like a mermaid but in a pokemon form, let's say it looks semi-human, but it still is a pokemon
Pokedex Entry Text: Santon is an extremely elegant pokemon, she rarely attacks unless defending itself or others
Average Height: 5 ft.
Average Weight: 120 LB.


How's this?

Never got a PM..

You never got the PM?

I'll send it again I guess.

Name: Shockle
Relation to other pokemon~ Shuckle
Evolution: Yes
Will Evolve: No
Type: Water/ Electric
Moves it can learn: Harden, Withdraw, Water gun, thunderbolt, Rapid Spin, Thunder, Hydro Pump, Surf, Waterfall, Shock Cannon, Zap Bolt
Special Ability: Static, Lightning Rod
Appearance: A larger, orange shelled Shuckle with many extra holes on it's back. Also, several small lightning rods on it's back
Pokedex Entry Text: Shockle are known to hide in thier shells more than thier previous form, but this allows them to build up electricity in themselves. They are known to attract lightning to the lightning rods on their backs.
Average Height: 3'
Average Weight: 600 pounds

Let me guess, it's an alt Evolution obtained using a thunderstone right?

sure

Accepted.

I want in, but I don't have time for a sheet right now. I have 3, that's right, THREE pokemon in mind. All pre-evolutions.

Glad to have you help Belthazar, you usually have Win Ideas.