i like the fact that the hair style always stays the same

keep it up and all that jazz

The right eye looks a little too close to the nose

Cool,

Am wondering if this is a place to talk to Steven ?

Yeah, looks really nice.

But I'm still having issues with the eye.

Me too, it's probably partially this;


I hope to improve on in for the next drawing.



If you want to ask me questions you can always ask me here, yes. Sending me a PM is also an option.

The eyes look out of place because their soft on a tough looking body. You don't really look friednly except at the face.

Quickie.

0.o That looks fantastic!
You sure aren't playing around when it comes to quick spriting.

Joker driving a desk chair lineart WIP.

Everything looks good and intact.

The only problem i have is the face because it doesn't really speak "Joker" much but hopefully the make-up/finished look will give back that kind of feel

I can understand what you mean, but I think that once the colouring and the make up are applied, it should resemble him more, yes.

Looks like an older version of joker I hate.

Heroes and villains usually don't have superconssistant designs so I take various aspects from various designs to put something together that I like.

The suit is based on Arkham/Injustice
Face shape/detailing is based moreso on his various cartoon incarnations+the killing joke
Make Up'll be based on Arkham/Heath Ledger

Decided to drop joker in favor of working on some original stuff



The Rad Jackal

Originally born in 1130 B.C., he was a corrupted and arrogant pharaoh whose kingdom suffered droughts, civil unrest and famine during his reign. The citizens, growing increasingly tired of the decay of their country, decide to put the corrupt pharaoh on trial him and murder him. In his final moments, the pharaoh expierences a vision of a burning jackal, and is punished by the gods for his misrule of Egypt, doomed to an eternal yet restless sleep in his grave, while quickly fading in obscurity.

'The Jackal' arises from his grave in the present day, in the s**** of the Egyptian Museum in Caïro. In a strange twist of fate, the fickle finger of fight has given the pharaoh a second chance, to make good his corrupt past and allow him a chance for redemption, him being the last of the New Kingdom. As the Egyptian Gods are long gone in modern day, The Jackal was crafted as a soldier that could channel a friction of their power would the need ever arise. That time is now. As the pharaoh's soul is placed within the jackal soldier, he comes to adopt the indentity of The Jackal. Risen again, 'The Jackal' awakens superhuman senses, agility and speed and the ability to communicate with all living beings on earth through telepathy.

He awakes in a strange modern Caïro, under the iron fist of a dictator who claims to be 'The New Ramesses'. Originally bent on taking back 'his' throne, The Jackal soon has a change of heart when he realises that he can never truly live in society again due his appearance. He then starts to focus on his redemption and looking for ways to take down Ramesses and give the land he will soon come to know and love again a rightful and just governement.



the story/character were thought up in 5 minutes when I was watching a documentary on Egypt because "jackals are kinda neat", so it's probably not 10/10 but I don't really intend to do anything with it so yeah.