I'm just here to leave a link to my story, The Regulator. About a year ago I left an unfinished, rough version of it on these same forums. However, that version of the story was very dramatically different, especially in the writing style, so I decided to make this new topic for the newer story. This is the "final" version. It's still in progress and currently comes in a 43 "chapters" (They aren't traditional chapters in that they aren't all several pages long, more like segments of the story), over 30,000 words and 74 pages. As I mentioned before, it's still in the process of being written, but I thought I'd leave a link here in order to get more exposure and, hopefully, some critique.

Enjoy, http://www.writing.com/main/books/item_id/1955446-The-Regulator