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Nick
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The proportions are a bit off like you mentioned, but overall it's a nicely detailed sprite. Is the sword handle supposed to stick out that much?
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luckycrime
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I have a problem with the left shoulder. You covered it with a cape and it looks alright but it still needs to be fixed. I don't see much of a problem with the sprite actually.
I thought the main hero was "you"? You could even created your own limited protaganist. My friend play the game when ever I see him so it might be good. I think it's similar to advance wars for the GBA and I did love that game....
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Steven
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But maybe just maybe instead of just complaining about things like a grumpy dwarf, you could actually point out exactly what bothers you and give some suggestions on how to fix it.
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Fri Mar 08, 2013 11:22 am |
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luckycrime
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Only if he willing to ask. His target is the left shoulder, what wrong with it? I'll let him find out. If he fails too often then I will offer my suggestions and show how I would do it.
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Fri Mar 08, 2013 12:25 pm |
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Steven
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The plot thickens.
Anyway good job Reix you're getting better. The legs are a bit too short in comparrison to the body, and the lower part of the left arm doesn't fit will with the upper arm (off-proportioned) and the hair still eyes a bit sloppy. Other then that; solid improvement.
I also like the 3D Models. cool stuff.
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Reix
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http://fireemblem.wikia.com/wiki/File:Chrom_concept.jpgKinda. I suppose it could due to be one shorter and not look worse. I would assume broadening his shoulder, as it looks a little wimpy for a guy like him. I've played the demo, and to my understanding Chrom is the hero/king/lord/whatever, and the PC is a dude with amnesia that becomes his strategist. I need to look up some tutorials on hair. That's easily my least favorite part of the sprite.
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Fri Mar 08, 2013 7:16 pm |
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Reix
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Mon Mar 11, 2013 12:04 am |
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Nick
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Looks better but the shoulder isn't broad enough on the right side.
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Reix
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Steven
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You oughtta stop pillow-shading clothes, dude.
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Wed Mar 13, 2013 4:06 pm |
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Reix
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These a bit better?
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Steven
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No because you are still pillowing it. Do you understand what 'pillow shading' means? I suggest going back to the jus archives to get some inight in how they handled clothing folds and etc.
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Thu Mar 14, 2013 5:54 pm |
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Reix
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Steven
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Much better, it makes the clothing less flat.
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Sun Mar 17, 2013 4:42 am |
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Reix
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Robin, the PC from Awakening. Probably should differentiate the shades more, but I like how it turned out.
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