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A Cat
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They're basically saying you should rewrite everything.
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King of Squids
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Toku, I think you are to young to understand some things about RPIng, a majority of people in the RP section have had more expeirance in this sort of field than you have. The probelm with your character is how low quality and lack of detail's that your Character pocesses, you don't seem to know how to make a regular RP character simply because you don't know how. If you want the jist of what I'm saying it's this. You lack details...many details, in which build up a character. Get it now? _________________ Wharg.
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A Cat
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 | | | | <[^Deux^]> wrote: Toku, I think you are to young to understand some things about RPIng, a majority of people in the RP section have had more expeirance in this sort of field than you have. The probelm with your character is how low quality and lack of detail's that your Character pocesses, you don't seem to know how to make a regular RP character simply because you don't know how. If you want the jist of what I'm saying it's this. You lack details...many details, in which build up a character. Get it now? | | | | |
You're never too young to RP. Back when I began I was actually 12, and god was I dreadful at it. But the thing is, when you start young, it's better to just try to RP, because you can meet other people with more experience than you and can learn from them. It's something you become better at as your work on it. So what I think he should do is rewrite his bio, add some detail to it, and join in an RP right away. The more time he has with better RPers should help him become better as he continues. If it doesn't, then there is something wrong with him.
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King of Squids
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| | | | Whimskull wrote: | | | | <[^Deux^]> wrote: Toku, I think you are to young to understand some things about RPIng, a majority of people in the RP section have had more expeirance in this sort of field than you have. The probelm with your character is how low quality and lack of detail's that your Character pocesses, you don't seem to know how to make a regular RP character simply because you don't know how. If you want the jist of what I'm saying it's this. You lack details...many details, in which build up a character. Get it now? | | | | |
You're never too young to RP. Back when I began I was actually 12, and god was I dreadful at it. But the thing is, when you start young, it's better to just try to RP, because you can meet other people with more experience than you and can learn from them. It's something you become better at as your work on it. So what I think he should do is rewrite his bio, add some detail to it, and join in an RP right away. The more time he has with better RPers should help him become better as he continues. If it doesn't, then there is something wrong with him. | | | | |
Well, if you say so Whimmy, I hope your right. _________________Wharg.
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Nini
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Same I honestly remember my first rp when i was like.. 16 maybe? Niniva version 0.5, dont even want to go into detail. its embarrassing. suffice to say ive improved.
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{420}sMoKeWeEd{420}
Joined: Fri Aug 15, 2008 10:03 pm Posts: 2825 Location: being a genius Gender: little girl Country: 
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| | | | Nini wrote: Same I honestly remember my first rp when i was like.. 16 maybe? Niniva version 0.5, dont even want to go into detail. its embarrassing. suffice to say ive improved. | | | | |
i started when i was 12 and pwnd 
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King of Squids
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Anyone else find this hard to believe? _________________Wharg.
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Nini
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Nope, hes still 12
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Kyzak
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I'm still twelve
What does that say
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{420}sMoKeWeEd{420}
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The Cool
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Run. Run FAST.
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King of Squids
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I honestly can't believe this guy, like at all. _________________Wharg.
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{420}sMoKeWeEd{420}
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King of Squids
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and now you just proved to be a weeaboo. _________________Wharg.
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