Aight, changed it

Well I was close

Ok...I know I said I'd give it to you by today but the mall was hectic and then home was hectic...so expect it by tomorrow <.<

Don't rush yourself. ^^

ill submit mine soon enough, but do i NEED an aura and associated abilities as a VIP character? im trying to plot this out, may have to change what i initially envisioned.

yeah you need one, I'll assign it to you via PM after reading it.

Username: Hakker

Name: Eton Lanen

Age: 42

VIP rank : Leader

Appearance: The leader of Delta stood tall as a real leader should, measuring 5'10" on a good day. His face was beginning to show the proof of his age, wrinkles forming as he spent a great deal of time strategizng and running his eyes through battle reports. His blonde hair usually laid flat on his head in an extreme case of helmet hair, as he spent many hours with the protective hat on. While has face had aged, one part still shone as brightly as ever, his brown eyes burned with the determination for achieving his goal. Like many leaders, his survival had been put in front of his mobility, so he went into battle dressed in three layers of thick protection, the only visible one being the set of plate mail that made up the first layer. Under all that protection he was donned in a thin tunic to protect him from the chafing, and he was known to strip down to said layer, a feat that was impossible in mid-combat and would force him to temporarily retreat, should his opponent prove too be nimble and hard to hit. A crimson cloak covered his his back, his country's banner encrusted into the center. While he despised it, he also owned a noble's outfit for formal occasions, tailored from the finest silk and dyed red, the lining being gold, a color scheme that his father had used before him, remarking that the red outfit identified him as a killer, one who had spilled the blood of many.

Personality: Considered by many a loving ruler, but seems to have a ruthless, unforgiving side when it comes to the Omega nation. Beyond that, determination drives him to use every available resource in his arsenal to attempt and gain control of The Heart. When in battle, he will usually stand in front of his troops, leading them to victory, regardless of the sacrifices he has to make.

Bio: Not much could be said about the ruler that was not yet known by his people or his enemies, as most had become public knowledge, whether he liked it or not. He was born the sun of the previous leader, as these things often went. Destined for ruling from the cradle, it wasn't long before he got the classes given to his ancestors when they were preparing to rise to power. Diplomacy, swordsmanship, archery, even etiquette were burned into his head from a very tender age. But it was tradition, it was customary, it was normal. He knew no other way, and so the decision was quickly made to raise his first born child, his daughter, in a similar fashion, preparing her to take his place when he met his demise. Unlike some well known rulers, Eton had time to prepare for his time on the throne, his father perishing in a battle against Omega when the man was 24. It was at this time that two other important events occured. His wife announced she was with child, after respectully waiting for the mourning process of her father-in-law to end. Twas also somewhere between the death of his father and the announcement that he was going to be a father, that his desires to destroy Omega with every man or child at his desposal, and to take the heart for the good of his people, became public knowledge. Now, the rules governs either from his throne room, or from the very first line of battle.

Alliance: Delta

Aura: Summer

Aura Abilities: Ignition, Drought and Burn

Weapons:

Default weaponry, used when Eton is in his suit of armor.

Longsword, a plain long sword held in both hands, it's blade measuring a full 36" in length, and is a rather used option for weaponry, the leader knew. However, it was still effective at cutting and striking, as well as thrusting, albeit less than the estoc, unable to pierce armor quite as effectively. It was still a considerable weapon, able to force a man hit on the shoulder with it to the ground. It was believed by Eton that most deaths caused by this weapon of his were not due to cuts or stab wounds, but the blunt trauma it gave the recepient.

Weaponry worn when he is out of armor and down to his tunic or in rare cases, royal robes.

Estoc, a heavy, though one handed piercing longsword that found its origin in the act of piercing enemy armor when cutting weapons stopped being able to kill an armored enemy in one hit. It relies completely on thrusting attacks to do it's damage, being unsharpened at the sides due to it's thin blade, only the tip being a danger to enemy opponent.

Buckler, a small shield to accompany the Estoc, this serves to free the estoc up from parrying duty with its deflecting capabilities, allowing Eton to instead counter with his thrusts. The shield is far from strong or large enough to actually take any blows directly, so instead it is used to redirect the incoming attacks, sliding them off the shield's surface to avoid damage.

Weapon Ability:

Longsword; the blade heats up, capable of burning an opponent or, when exposed to an opposing weapon long enough, melting the metal.

Estoc; Mirages form around the blade, making it's movements harder to predict and follow.

Buckler; The shield is able to nullify some of the weaker summer abilities, and will weaken the effect of stronger ones.

Added...now we wait for Nini and Kiki...

Oh yeah anyone in this RP might wanna read this

That's great Hakker! Was it already passed through Jin Halysoy?

EDIT: Nevermind

Username: (Not) Sayonara / xnejihatakex19

Else Gruenewald

Age: 23

Appearance: Standing at a short stature of 161 cm (5'2.8"), Else has long, uneven dark green hair which goes down to the
middle of her back, she has frazzled sideburns to her shoulders, and long bangs that get in the way of her eyes. Her large eyes
match the same dark green of her hair, with thin pupils. She has a small nose and mouth, which contribute to the vacant
expression she carries most of the time. Else has tanned skin, with a beauty spot on the bottom right of her right palm.
She wears a white leather long coat that's barely small enough for her, almost touching the ground; it is wrapped tightly around
her waist, and buttoned down to her knees, though it is more flexible than it looks. Underneath she wears a thin light gray
shirt and flimsy dark gray pants; she also wears very lightweight sandals.

Personality: While Else is quiet, she looks intelligent and unfriendly. When she's normally speaking with people she knows, her
voice sounds bubbly and sharp like a child's, and she always seems immature (i.e. Begging, whining, wanting too many things).
Deep down, Else is actually a manipulating, selfish woman. Despite claiming to be with Omega, she has always planned to betray them.

Bio: Actually born in Alpha, Else was taken away by strangers from her struggling parents before she could walk, and raised
to an adult as a citizen of Omega, with her former name changed. While finding her parents whom she is confident are still alive is a
priority, getting revenge against Omega to her own benefit is her most important goal. The strangers who raised her are practically
gone from her memory due to her hate for them, though she enjoys the fact that she recalls being the one who killed them herself.
The reason for the murder was the fact that she was practically used like a slave, and barely kept alive with moldy bread and
water, though it finally happened a few days after she discovered they weren't her actual parents. After hiding from the
government in Omega, she thought of ways to survive. Eventually, she slowly created her puppet which she named Asura. The
puppet was used to steal vital supplies and kill soldiers who she recognized to be from Omega. However, if she knew a person was
from Delta or Alpha, she wouldn't even touch them.
Else is currently surviving in Omega without being known to be the controller of the murdering puppet.

Alliance: Omega

Aura: Winter

Aura Abilities:

Deep Chill [12] - Else summons gusts of freezing wind to slow her targets in an area.

*Obscuring Mist [7] - By reducing the temperature of air and meeting it with warm temperatures, a mist is formed to reduce vision.
Ineffective in already-cold areas and more effective in warm areas, especially those with high humidity.

*Reduce Temperature [4~19] - Else can reduce the temperature of a relatively large area, though the severity can vary.
Slightly reducing costs 4 AP, while changing hot weather to freezing temperatures can cost up to 19 AP. Can't go below -5°C.

Weapons:

Asura - Her puppet, concealed by a plain wooden coffin she carries.

Stiletto - A slender black knife Else keeps in her left pocket, it can easily penetrate, but is ineffective at slicing despite its
edges. She found this after looking through the belongings of her fake parents.

Nodachi - Large two-handed Japanese sword with a length of 90 centimeters wielded by her puppet. If the situation calls for
it, she has enough mastery to use it herself, though she prefers her stiletto. The nodachi actually folds the opponent with its
weight, rather than cutting. Stolen from a peculiar blacksmith.

Weapon Abilities:

Asura - A small area around Asura passively has a sudden drop in temperature, which may slow down targets. The puppet leaves a
trail of cold air wherever it walks, but the wires have been enchanted to not form droplets which may give Else away.
If Else pleases, she can make Asura "breathe" to make him seem more lifelike, with the breath being visibly white. If the puppet is
struck with a weapon, it will partially freeze to allow it to easily break, which serves to disarm the attacker, though it can still be used if it is sturdy enough.

Stiletto & Nodachi - The weapons are always cold to the touch, wounds inflicted will momentarily feel cold in warm weather, but
will remain frozen in cold weather, which can be deadly. Steam and droplets of water are constantly forming when Else or Asura holds them.

Extra: She usually leaves Asura's coffin hidden in daytime, but she might carry it on her back (Which isn't that hard for her).
All of the wires used to control the puppet go in with the coffin, and is wound up on an instrument-like board.

Asura: Else's useful puppet, only known in the small area where she resides. Originally a simple wood puppet with a knife
attached to its hand covered in rags, she slowly gathered materials and ideas which evolved Asura into its samurai appearance. It
wears ashen-red armor, with its "face" covered by a demon mask with blacked out eyes. The helmet has a simple crescent
attached to the top. The rest is standard: the neck guard, body armor, shoulder guard, sleeves, shin guards and thigh guards; but
inside the armor is still the same wooden puppet.

Asura is controlled by a complex network of threads attached to all of Else's fingers and toes, thus, she can't move Asura if there
are too many obstacles between them. This makes hiding a problem, she always has to find a spot with a clear path between her
and the puppet. The wires reach up to 27 meters (Around 88 feet). She can choose whether or not to use her feet as well, so she
can move at the same time, but several movements cannot be performed, like jumping, or many sword techniques.

Learning to fluidly move Asura with wires took most of her current life, in which she stole and begged for food herself. Begging was
about the worst thing she had ever felt, especially since it was in a poor country full of men she hated. Moving the heavy armor
with her mere fingers has given her large fighting potential, although she can actually control her puppet better than her actual body.


*Original, decide for me if they're allowed.

@Sayo

Geez, that was great. Are you looking to be a major character? Because I'd like to see this character in action. I'll talk with Jin Halysoy when he gets back.

Is only Hal allowed to assign 'seasons' or can u go ahead so i can finish my flipping bio?

Well, I'm coDM... So I guess I can. I'll go ahead and do that.

Ok, Nini, you are summer. That's what I personally see that character as, it's subject to change though. I'm sure he agrees. We agree on like everything.

Sayo, you are winter.

I was totally expecting Winter.