Welp, time to do the "2nd place" of my poll, Blade!

I like that you gave him an electric-based design. Maybe Blue could use fire?

Polling Ended
Winner
HATSUNE MIKU!

For the record, I did start writing this after my stream, but I had to go out to dinner before I finished. Then I didn't really get to use my computer until now because I went to a smash tourney today >_>

Not very familiar with this character, but I'll tell you what I think Shine.

-If I played Ayumi, my favourite palette swap would be her red palette
-Is this ftilt a roundhouse kick or more like a front kick?
-So this utilt basically taps the opponent but is surprisingly hard to get through? Sounds like the kind of move to troll your opponent with (plus its paper lel)
-If her dtilt hits an airborne opponent, what does it do?
-I kinda like this dash attack, basically a Peach dash attack but sending away rather than up
-For smashes, perhaps you also want to include how much damage they do when fully charged. Also remember that KB also heavily scales with the amount of damage an attack does (recall that a sweetspot Knee of Justice does 17%, and Peach's stitchface does 36%), so keep this in mind when designing moves. It is possible for moves that deal low damage to have high enough KB to cause tumble (Pichu's uair does 4% but puts into tumble really early, compared to Fox's bair which does 15% and won't tumble until after a few hits). I look at the damage a move does to also determine its KB, and I design characters with this in mind.
-This upsmash sounds pretty gross to get hit by. A cool aesthetic might be to make it a multihitting move (like each piece of paper gives a cut)
-Heh heh, her nair really reminds me of the Pack Whack move from Banjo-Tooie
-The uair/bair sounds like the sorts of moves you would get pretty surprised by. It would be great if they also had a ton of hitlag, like Zelda's fair/dair.
-Is this sneeze a reference to Phoenix Wright?
-Eww, who would use a spoon to murder someone? Maybe I shouldn't even ask HOW they would have done it either...
-Ah, so she has to use build up the evidence in order to get an incredibly powerful move like Rest. May I also suggest, to further balance the move, that she loses all of her evidence on death? At the very least there needs to be some penalty for dying.
-I like this counter and the way it connects to her stacks of Evidence.
-I can easily picture these throws, and they look surprisingly painful.
-The overall gameplay theme and character theme is similar to Phoenix Wright, which cannot be helped I'm sure. However, many of her neutrals are focused on the use of her schoolbag rather than her pointer finger. In addition, how she uses the Evidence is different because she uses it to power up two of her moves rather than as the way to go Super Saiyan (or just a basic projectile).

Amazing that i started all these polls that other people are using, which is good. Will post the winner next day, it's sissel from ghost trick.

Thanks for the review :3 I'll go make the according info changes!

I'll also conclude my Poll at 12PM EST

I really like this. I had planned to make a game involving Blade and Blue, so I may do a Blue moveset incorporating those ideas.

Actually, for some reason, i just DON'T WANT TO DO KING BOO! im not sure why. if you insist, ill just do the special moves.

Thanks guys. This one got a better reception then I thought it would

My plan was to make a combat based game strung around combos for Blade and more power for Blue. It was going to be called "The Forgotten Ones" and Blade, Blue and potentially Azrael were going to receive redesigns.

i see no one reviewed my little mac moveset

... you had a little mac moveset?

What did i start now everyone is using polls Source: Ghost Trick [DS]
Okay poll winner is sissel, so here it here Warning Spoilers. Like super spoilers for one of the best made DS games ever for that i won't post any image to show a spoiler [So don't read if you haven't played that amazing game which then you should go buy it now]
Okay yes i am using the cat, which is true sissel, I WARNED YOU DIDN'T I!!!!
Any attacks that are major spoilers i use the spoiler to hide it for people.

Stats:
Weight Lighter then Pikachu.
Speed - About as fast as
Air Speed - Like
Shield - Like jigglypuff's, sissel will be launched if the shield is broken, though it won't kill sissel until around 30%.

------------Jab Combo and Tilts-------------------
Jab Combo - Sissel does basic cat claw fury swipes
F-Tilt - A ghostly projection of a Armor holding a sword with a globe stabbed in it swings counter clockwise and hits forward.
D- Tilt - Sissel does a classic caw grab with 2 paws, though it doesn't grab just attacks and has low knockback for combos
U-Tilt - Ghost Searchlight - Sissel summons a ghostly projection of a search light that fires a short range beam diagonally that does some damage but mostly for combos.
Dash Attack - Sissel Hops on a ghostly projection of a bicycle and charges forward, Due to sissel being small and a bicycle being huge compared to him, this is a really safe dash attack to use.

----------Smash Attacks---------------------------
U-Smash - Sissel summons a ghostly projection of a crosswalk that lifts up to attack, not the highest launching, but has great range.
F-Smash - A ghostly projection of Yomiel comes in and does a punch similar to little's mac f-smash pointed downward., since sissel is not the one preforming the smash, it's a super safe disjoint.
D-Smash - Like the above, a ghostly projection of Yomiel does a spin attack similar to luigi's cyclone custom 3, which is strong but hits once.

----------Aerials------------------------------------
N-Air - A ghostly projection of a guitar appears in the center of sissel and plays notes that quickly scatter around sissel.
F-Air - Sissel does a doggy paddle in mid-air [Prehaps Missile taught him]
B-Air - A ghostly projection of a fan blade vertically appears slightly behind sissel's center and mutihits behind him.
U-Air - A ghostly projection of a Umbrella opens upwards, doesn't allow gliding cause it's just a ghost umbrella.
D-Air - A Ghostly projection of a Metal Craw below sissel opens and drops a wrecking ball below, has huge hitbox and meteors, but is amazing slow with so much ending lag, it is a projectile.

--------Grab and Throws---------------------------
Grab - A ghostly projection of a claw with a arm of various junk pieces extend out and grabs the foe, almost as long as samus's.
Z-Air - Same range as above but the claw clamps down in air and is most likely the strongest Z-Air.
F-Throw - The claw tosses the person forward.
B-Throw - The claw does a 180 slam and it launches the foe backwards.
U-Air - The claw tosses the foe upwards and tackle them upward.
D-Air - A simple downward slam.

-------Specials------------------------------------
I'm basicly going to have sissel borrow powers from other characters in the game to make this more workable
N-Spec - Yomiel - A ghostly projection of yomiel reaches out and grabs in front of sissel if it is succesful, you can take control of a person for a brief time [Similar to stun, but even with less duration to have] this will mean that you will lose control of sissel until then, also it will have huge start up lag and end lag.
S-Spec - Missile Swap - Sissel is swapped over a distance between himself and a cat statue, which will drop if in mid air after swapping, only able to get damage and knock back in the begining of the move.
U-Spec - Dial - This move is a combatination of pikachu's and black mage's, it has the range of black mage's but is a 4 hit version of pikachu's quick attack, however much faster and harder to control, and does no damage.
D-Spec - Not sure what to here so i'll just use this. Time Counter - Sissel does a counter, but instead of doing damage, he teleports to a direction he wants, allowing a good spacing tool.

-------------I got no final smash in mind---------------

You actually got one or two reviews.


Its nice to see this thread exploding with ideas again. Having no posts here for months was kinda lame... Anyway, my Maxwell moveset is near completition. Should be able to release it soon.

Indeed, when will the 1st page be updated though >.<