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Slender Man
Joined: Tue Jul 26, 2011 8:52 am
Posts: 140
Location: Holland, Europe.
Gender: Male
Skype: H1W25K1998
Currently Playing: AC: Brotherhood Multiplayer
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The first stage I ever made:
Mirage Arena ( still needs a background ):
Hall of Nothingness:
Night's Void:
Battlefield of the Forgotten:
_________________If you see him you shall run
And with your fear he'll block out the sun
Try and fight him if you can
But all shall fear the Slender Man.
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| Mon Aug 22, 2011 2:18 am |
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Nicko
Joined: Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:01 am Posts: 1310 Location: someplace where the kangaroos run wild Country: 
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Waifu: your dad
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These stages look really dull and lack proper perspective.
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| Mon Aug 22, 2011 3:14 am |
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PixelBoy
SSF2 Developer
Joined: Thu Sep 02, 2010 2:13 pm Posts: 726 Location: Minnesota Country: 
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Skype: LegitPixelBoy
Currently Playing: Super Smash Flash 2
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They're all very similar to each other
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| Mon Aug 22, 2011 3:26 am |
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Pope Krillin VI
Joined: Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:31 am Posts: 1342 Location: Queensland, Australia. Country: 
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Most of them actually have pretty descent perspective. Some of the stuff on the first stage looks really bad. As in, sloppily done. :/
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| Mon Aug 22, 2011 3:29 am |
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Slender Man
Joined: Tue Jul 26, 2011 8:52 am
Posts: 140
Location: Holland, Europe.
Gender: Male
Skype: H1W25K1998
Currently Playing: AC: Brotherhood Multiplayer
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yes, the first stage was a total disaster. xD and you guys have no need to be so cruel or something, you could say it differently or more friendly, if you please  _________________If you see him you shall run
And with your fear he'll block out the sun
Try and fight him if you can
But all shall fear the Slender Man.
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| Mon Aug 22, 2011 3:47 am |
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Nicko
Joined: Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:01 am Posts: 1310 Location: someplace where the kangaroos run wild Country:
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Waifu: your dad
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Then you don't know what decent perspective is. Looks like someone can't take criticism.
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| Mon Aug 22, 2011 3:53 am |
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Slender Man
Joined: Tue Jul 26, 2011 8:52 am
Posts: 140
Location: Holland, Europe.
Gender: Male
Skype: H1W25K1998
Currently Playing: AC: Brotherhood Multiplayer
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Dude, that wasn't criticism. that was just bytching on someone. Do you think you can make better stuff than me? _________________If you see him you shall run
And with your fear he'll block out the sun
Try and fight him if you can
But all shall fear the Slender Man.
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| Mon Aug 22, 2011 4:03 am |
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Pope Krillin VI
Joined: Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:31 am Posts: 1342 Location: Queensland, Australia. Country:
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The only one with bad perspective is the first one. The other ones are fine. Maybe YOU should learn some perspective.
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| Mon Aug 22, 2011 4:40 am |
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Michael
Joined: Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:47 am
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Location: At home, working and playing
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Lol... I just realized now that at the battlefield of the forgotten stage, theres a dude stuck in the ground at the bottom right... Well it looks like it
Also, isn't that first stage for a game called a CAMEO?
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| Mon Aug 22, 2011 4:41 am |
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Pope Krillin VI
Joined: Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:31 am Posts: 1342 Location: Queensland, Australia. Country:
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They all are I believe. Either that or test stages. But yes, his first stage is also in the CAMEO! topic.
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| Mon Aug 22, 2011 4:59 am |
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Steven
Site Moderator
Joined: Wed Nov 12, 2008 4:13 pm Posts: 7252 Country: 
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Waifu: ElvisDitto
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Try to study shading and detailing a bit more. This can easily be done by spriting objects (the object itself that you sprite doesnt matter, any object can be sprited for practise). Once you've got shading, lineart and the like down, then you should try to sprite stages again.
Also, if you truly wish to sprite stages, then I suggest practising Stage layout a bit.
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| Mon Aug 22, 2011 5:03 am |
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Slender Man
Joined: Tue Jul 26, 2011 8:52 am
Posts: 140
Location: Holland, Europe.
Gender: Male
Skype: H1W25K1998
Currently Playing: AC: Brotherhood Multiplayer
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k, thanks  See kids? THAT'S criticism. _________________If you see him you shall run
And with your fear he'll block out the sun
Try and fight him if you can
But all shall fear the Slender Man.
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| Mon Aug 22, 2011 5:12 am |
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Nick
Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:31 am
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Hes a really good stage spriter, actually. Also I suggest not complaining about people criticizing your work whether its productive or not, because if you do people wont want to give you their opinions. Instead of pointing out what is proper, take his advice and put in on paper. As for your stages, I suggest instead of making multiple - very bland stages. That you spend the time making just one stage. _________________
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| Mon Aug 22, 2011 1:56 pm |
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PixelBoy
SSF2 Developer
Joined: Thu Sep 02, 2010 2:13 pm Posts: 726 Location: Minnesota Country:
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Skype: LegitPixelBoy
Currently Playing: Super Smash Flash 2
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No. It was criticism. Nicko can make better stuff than you cause he listens to what people have to say. Just cause a dev doesn't say it doesn't mean it's not right. Nicko's one of the better spriters on this forum so I suggest you listen cause he's right on this.
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| Mon Aug 22, 2011 2:35 pm |
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Steven
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Joined: Wed Nov 12, 2008 4:13 pm Posts: 7252 Country:
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I wouldn't worry so much about what is critique and what not, if I were you, I'd be more concerned what I would do with the critique itself.
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| Mon Aug 22, 2011 3:28 pm |
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