I must humbly request-without any consultation from Hakker, mind you-- that if you're too lazy to make a complete, half-decent bio you just shut the f*** up and skulk away.

I copy pasted the character bio with the changes:

Name: Kate Fox
Gender: Female
Age: Twenty-Seven
Faction: Castle Knights

Personality: Kate is an easygoing person, and gentle towards people. Although sometimes kind-hearted, she tends to have anger issues and its a bit of a tomboy.. She isnt that atletical to the point she isnt a computer/videogame user. She has many friends, but she parts her way when she enters “Castle Knights”. She is a well rounded fighter, which helps her in this case. Not a boring person, she is usually found reading a book to learn more. When talking about boys, she doesnt say anything due to her boyfriend dumping her. She LOVES the color blue.

Appearance: Kate usually sports blue sunglasses, although she changes them depending on her mood. She sports a blue sunhat, and underneath is honey-colored hair. Her clothing is a steel blue tuxedo with a red rose. Weirdly, she sports blue shoes to complement her eyes (which are blue).She has a birthmark on her right ear.

Bio: Born in a distant island, Kate had decent childhood, although she was teased for liking basketball, baseball, and other boyish stuff. She was a kind and simple woman until one day something changed. She had a boyfriend that was everything she had hoped for, and then he dumped her. Kate was so furious, she decided to take her anger out by fighting with her father, who was a famous martial artist. After the fight, even though she lost, her father recognized her talent and asked her if she would like to be a fighting expertise. After harsh months of training, she was ready to fight for justice.

Weapon of choice: She utilizes various instruments, like a tennis racket and a bat. She also uses a "blend" technique taught to her by her father. With this technique, she could blend in any environment in any colored clothing. This reason is unknown.

I think... I think it needs work in general.

What parts? I just lost my creativity today.

"In general" usually means "Everything included in this group", at least in layman's terms.

This guy is clearly a troll.

Its obvious, no?

So stop acknowledging him, dumbass.

Just pointing it out so hopefully Hakker can deliver a swift and merciless ban.

There's.. really no need, if you notice he already replied to it.

Eh..

Tempted to just Re-use Niniva's old one for this.

Ive made a profile for her, for this RP, twice now, no sense in doing a third.

However my castle knight char will be different entirely, so ill get that up soon.

lol SAME I was just going to whip up Sylvia and use her again but I decided against it in the end.

Well then. Think I kind of went overboard with the background but as long as it isn't incoherent rambling, I am happy.

Name: Isaac Warryn (I am unoriginal)

Gender: Male

Age: 28 at death

Faction: Organization

Personality: Isaac is strangely chivalrous for one of the Organization, loathing robbers, womanizers and other such scum yet viewing the normally depicted as evil Organization as the final hope for the universe. He will often go out of his way to drive this point home to those who are not in the Organization, possibly even in the midst of battle if it is a distressing enough example. Though not emotionally detached, he will normally only befriend those who share his ideals of law before all and neglect others, barring few exceptions. He is one to act rather predictably under most situations, maintaining quite the dead serious outlook and rarely acting carefree as many others in the Organization would. Fury can easily be brought to him if one manipulates his hatred of evil deeds, though this fury is often cloaked behind a veil of tranquility, no matter how thin it may be. His chivalrous nature can work against him despite his lack of hesitation in combat, as he cannot bring himself to harm a woman through physical means regardless of their intent.

Appearance: Isaac retained his well-built shell of a body even after his untimely death at the hands of the Heartless, though his strength is hard to gauge by appearance alone as he does not have the rippling muscles one would expect. As all on his fathers' side of the family he towers over ordinary men at roughly six foot eight, and with this height comes increased bulk as well; some thirty pounds spread throughout his body. His skin is ever so slightly tanned, a mere shade darker and hardly noticeable at first glance. Short black hair adorns his head, kept rather neat and equal everywhere except the front, where uncut strands are left to gravitate above his dark green eyes. As many of the organization Isaac owns no other clothing other then the standard black robe which is worn consistently, though it lacks the hood one would expect from such an article.

Bio: Raised in what most would call a trashy neighborhood with a middle-aged and then-single mother, Isaac had a difficult but manageable life through childhood and problems other then the obvious complication of poverty rarely turned to them. Little changed until he managed to get a job at the train station at the mere age of fifteen, though his height and build lend itself to falsery well enough. Money then came less of a problem, though it still loomed over them with relentlessly. The slums being what they were, crime was rampant and Isaac had to brave much of it. This upbringing allowed some minuscule seed of hatred for the scum of the world to plant itself and grow freely. Three years passed by, and in those years things were getting slowly yet steadily easier. It was shortly after his eighteenth that his mother met a man uncannily like the one who was responsible for his existence, a husk of sleaze and scum hiding behind a disguise of charm. It took this man perhaps a month to worm his way into their household completely and discard his patience to act out his womanizing nature. This gave birth to both chivalry and even further hatred, and this hatred would later give birth to a Nobody. Days, weeks, months of time were spent looking for this man; not to learn ways to defend oneself or seek assistance, but to extract corrupting vengeance, and soon time bared fruition. Though crime was committed, crime was redeemed and this stopped the kindling of fury. The remaining living years of Isaacs' life were spent caring for his half-dead mother, who passed away a year before Twilight Town was invaded by the Heartless and turned into a battleground for the universal tug-of-war. Reborn into his husk, Isaac was easily convinced that the Nobodies were those who were striving for purity and the Castle Knights opposed them. War was necessary, and it was justified.

Weapon of choice: Obtained from the spoils of war and given to him by the Organization is a pair of heavily plated cestus(cesti? I'm not sure if plural use is applicable here) of what seems to be steel that are more gauntlets then actual weapons. Interconnecting plates predominate most of the forearm and reach just below the middle of the palm, intentionally ending in a sharp point, effectively acting as armguards. It is needless to say that these mass-increasing weapons can shatter bone and cause internal damage to wreak havoc upon those hit with force. Though normally such weapons would be unable to harm Heartless, it seems to be just as effective on them as they are on anything else despite the lack of a skeleton.

Well, Hakker probably thought he was just a regular old idiot.

No betrayals? Aw. Well, I guess I could still do some kind of assassin character.