This is a great story. It had a good plot, plot twists, and [i]OK[i/] art. 4 out of 5. Some of the impersonations could have been better, when he said please, he sounded like he was screeching instead of trying to sound like a little girl.
Tue Jul 14, 2009 4:23 pm
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