ok here is kenichi

Very small arms. They're too skinny and too short. Otherwise, not bad at all.

thanks for the cc ill fix him here is another sprite i forgot to upload,the head is still a w.i.p

I noticed something that slows down your work a lot, you tend to add as much detail as you possibly can before uploading it. Being creative is great and all that, but with your sprites its the anatomy that's the problem. So if you pump out a bunch of characters without the little intricate details we can tell you whats wrong with the body shape (spend as much time as you can on the anatomy). After you start getting the hang of forming different body types properly your spriting will improve a greatly, mainly because your already great at adding detail.

Hope ya take this into consideration =p

ok ill work on that thanks for the cc

I've seen a better on Kenichi on the Expansion Forums maybe you can edit the sprite into a new pose or maybe conbine the two.

yeah i saw the kenichi on ef for expansion made by cav,its way better than mine but i don't plan on using other peoples stuff.

okay fixed some stuff last 2

One of the first things i noticed is that his leg is coming out of his shirt and not his waste, this makes him look really weird. Its almost like you drew the legs AFTER the shirt, try and fix that up. Also the arms almost seem to thin for the body length, so try tweaking that a bit.

Edit:
I decided it would be better to show you visually.
Changelog:
- Fixed the leg off to the side
- Made the left leg angled a bit more
- Made the arms thicker
- Made the shoulders flat (had a weird bump)

What would be best for you to do, is to delete my changes BUT copy the change log. Take the version with the dark pants and fix everything on that little list but on the other one. (try not to copy mine) then post back up and see how it is.

k thanks ill get to work on it.

is this better i followed the changelog

It's better but I think he is too thin Great improvements though!

thanks,ill see what i can do about that

The left leg needs to be brought to the left a bit more, about a pixel or two. Looks like the leg isn't attached to the body, other than that it looks a lot better.

thanks ill fix it