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Name:Nirak Dragonblade
Race:Human
Appearance:Image
Abilities:Speed,Stealth and holy power,Smart strategy
Weapon:Jur(katar)
Age:29

Bio:The eldest son in the Dragonblade family. A paladin who was respectful,brave and kind.
Paladins were holy knights that are preparing for the a war called "The Holy War".His town was peaceful not until monsters attack the town.His family did not survive except his youngest brother Razma.Nirak was nearly killed by the attack of the monsters and he thought

Nirak:Would the Dark Lord did this attack?
and his brother answered.
Razma:It could be and the Holy War was near right?
Nirak:Maybe he is excelling.
And they started their journey.

While walking to the Geffen Fields they fainted because of thirst.
There was a party with a lord knight,high priest and a sniper and saw them in the fields and rushed to Geffen.
Nirak wakes up.

Kafra:Oh you woke up.
Nirak:Where am I?
Kafra:You are in Geffen.
Nirak:Where is my brother is he safe?
Kafra:He is well now.
Nirak goes out and meet the party

LK:Oh your awake!
Nirak:Hi Im Nirak Dragonblade
LK:Im Ellsyria Angevon
HP:Hi Im Kethios Laventar. If you heard about our family Im not like them
Sniper:Hi Im Sierra. What happend to you?
Nirak:I was a survivor in the Prontera incident.
Kethios:Something happend to Prontera?!
Nirak:Yes. I think the Dark Lord did it.
Kethios:The Dark Lord. Lets hunt for him.
Party:YEAH!!!!
Kethios:Wanna join?
Nirak:Okay.
Nirak:Hey Razma! Lets go!
Ellsy:*rushes to Keth and cries
And Nirak became a holy assassin cross because of his anger but he was still in the good side.
Razma became a Taekwondo Master.

ADDITIONAL NOTES:
If your a Ragnarok player you would understand this story.
Prontera:Where the Priest Guild,Knight Guild and Paladin Guild are and
Ellsy's home of course her family died.

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Sun Nov 09, 2008 7:34 am
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Ugh, this is terrible. The bio is written is f*** script form! Not to mention your grammar sucks balls.


Sun Nov 09, 2008 5:19 pm
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..

Someone else take care of this wad of s***, this is too bad even for *ME* to rape.. I'm still chafing, anyway..


Sun Nov 09, 2008 7:23 pm
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I'm gonna give Kyzak's bold thingy a shot, and fail horribly at it. Anyway.

Prometheus wrote:
Name:Nirak Dragonblade Appearantly, If you have Dragon in your last name, It makes you badass.

Race:Human Nothing wrong.
Appearance:*BIGASSPIC*Yes, post a picture. "I'm gonna be lazy and not use words."
Abilities:Speed,Stealth and holy power,Smart strategy Speed, and stealth.
f***. Make him invisible and magical while you're at it. Don't forget invincibility. holy powers...As in the ability to make people say HOLY s*** by just reading this?

Weapon:Jur(katar)
Yes, don't explain.
We ALL know what it means.

Age:29


Bio:The eldest son in the Dragonblade family. A paladin who was respectful,brave and kind.
Paladins were holy knights that are preparing for the a war called "The Holy War".His town was peaceful not until monsters attack the town.His family did not survive except his youngest brother Razma.Nirak was nearly killed by the attack of the monsters and he thought

Nirak:Would the Dark Lord did this attack?
and his brother answered.
Razma:It could be and the Holy War was near right?
Nirak:Maybe he is excelling.
And they started their journey.

While walking to the Geffen Fields they fainted because of thirst.
There was a party with a lord knight,high priest and a sniper and saw them in the fields and rushed to Geffen.
Nirak wakes up.

Kafra:Oh you woke up.
Nirak:Where am I?
Kafra:You are in Geffen.
Nirak:Where is my brother is he safe?
Kafra:He is well now.
Nirak goes out and meet the party

LK:Oh your awake!
Nirak:Hi Im Nirak Dragonblade
LK:Im Ellsyria Angevon
HP:Hi Im Kethios Laventar. If you heard about our family Im not like them
Sniper:Hi Im Sierra. What happend to you?
Nirak:I was a survivor in the Prontera incident.
Kethios:Something happend to Prontera?!
Nirak:Yes. I think the Dark Lord did it.
Kethios:The Dark Lord. Lets hunt for him.
Party:YEAH!!!!
Kethios:Wanna join?
Nirak:Okay.
Nirak:Hey Razma! Lets go!
Ellsy:*rushes to Keth and cries
And Nirak became a holy assassin cross because of his anger but he was still in the good side.
Razma became a Taekwondo Master.
HOLY s*** WARRIORS PREPARING FOR THE HOLY s*** WAR.
I like the part where you start making yourself look like an idiot. The whole thing.
First, The grammar is f*** terrible.
Second, see NJ's post.
Third, It's just like
RAZMA BECAME TAEKWONDO MASTER
Yay. Not even an explanation.

ADDITIONAL NOTES:
If your a Ragnarok player you would understand this story.
Prontera:Where the Priest Guild,Knight Guild and Paladin Guild are and
Ellsy's home of course her family died.

It sucks overall.


Sun Nov 09, 2008 7:44 pm
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I just realized that he contradicted himself in the first few sentences of the history, hich was as far as I could bare to read.
It said his family didn't survive except his brother, yet he's alive.


Sun Nov 09, 2008 9:56 pm
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English isnt my first language
Any comments?

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Tue Nov 11, 2008 12:34 am
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Prometheus wrote:
Name:Nirak Dragonblade What Kebin said.
Race:Human Nothing wrong.
Appearance: Nothing wrong, but personally I like WORDS instead of crap drawings.
Abilities:Speed,Stealth and holy power,Smart strategy What Kebin said, PLUS, SMART STRATEGY?! WTF? Is he strategic at finidng his way out of an empty room?
Weapon:Jur(katar) What Kebin said.
Age:29 Nothing wrong.

Okay, this part, I shall divide:
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The eldest son in the Dragonblade family. A paladin who was respectful,brave and kind.
Paladins were holy knights that are preparing for the a war called "The Holy War".His town was peaceful not until monsters attack the town.His family did not survive except his youngest brother Razma.Nirak was nearly killed by the attack of the monsters and he thought
Er... WOT? What were these monsters? Faces of doom? How the HECK did his little bro survive instead of his father, probably WAY MORE TRAINED THAN AN ANNOYING INFANT?


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Nirak:Would the Dark Lord did this attack?
and his brother answered.
Razma:It could be and the Holy War was near right?
Nirak:Maybe he is excelling.
And they started their journey.

While walking to the Geffen Fields they fainted because of thirst.
There was a party with a lord knight,high priest and a sniper and saw them in the fields and rushed to Geffen.
Nirak wakes up.

Kafra:Oh you woke up.
Nirak:Where am I?
Kafra:You are in Geffen.
Nirak:Where is my brother is he safe?
Kafra:He is well now.
Nirak goes out and meet the party

LK:Oh your awake!
Nirak:Hi Im Nirak Dragonblade
LK:Im Ellsyria Angevon
HP:Hi Im Kethios Laventar. If you heard about our family Im not like them
Sniper:Hi Im Sierra. What happend to you?
Nirak:I was a survivor in the Prontera incident.
Kethios:Something happend to Prontera?!
Nirak:Yes. I think the Dark Lord did it.
Kethios:The Dark Lord. Lets hunt for him.
Party:YEAH!!!!
Kethios:Wanna join?
Nirak:Okay.
Nirak:Hey Razma! Lets go!
Ellsy:*rushes to Keth and cries
And Nirak became a holy assassin cross because of his anger but he was still in the good side.
Razma became a Taekwondo Master.
OKAY, WTH IS THIS UTTER PIECE OF CRUDITY, OPPOSING TO EVERY FUGGIN' RP RULE?!


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ADDITIONAL NOTES:
If your a Ragnarok player you would understand this story.
Prontera:Where the Priest Guild,Knight Guild and Paladin Guild are and
Ellsy's home of course her family died.

What?

All my comments are in there. Hope you can see them.

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