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Shin 

Is this good?
Awesome! 8%  8%  [ 1 ]
Needs more practice 92%  92%  [ 12 ]
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Name: Shin

Appearance: Black hair, Long collar coat

Abilities: Control blades

Background: When he was young a unknown society mark his arm and it was painful for this he some villagers hated him but some did not and in every town he was treated as a evil fighter. For this he wanted revenge.

Alliance: Neutral

Gender:Boy

Age:15

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Thu Oct 02, 2008 1:41 am
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... OH MY GOD.

Someone else want to get this one? I think I just lost half my brain cells while reading it.

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Thu Oct 02, 2008 1:42 am
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I am just an amateur

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Thu Oct 02, 2008 1:44 am
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Where's the "DEAR GOD IT BURNS!" option on the poll?

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Thu Oct 02, 2008 2:45 am
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Hakker wrote:
Where's the "DEAR GOD IT BURNS!" option on the poll?

Should have edited it :3

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Thu Oct 02, 2008 4:05 am
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This is just an practice

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Thu Oct 02, 2008 6:03 am
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If it's just a practice, don't put it here.
If it's just a practice, your bad.
If it's just a practice, do a 10x better one.
If it's just a practice, put a 'Omg this is hell bad' option on the poll.

That's my advice.

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Thu Oct 02, 2008 12:27 pm
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:facepalm: why would you even add a poll to it? Were you that proud of it? Take a look at the other profiles around here, even some of the worst ones have more content than that..

My advice is if you're going to use this character, make a heavily revised bio if you so choose to have one.

Need more information on his abilities, explain what it does and how it works.

Background, barely made any sense whatsoever. Revisions are needed just to make those few sentences become understandable. You will need far more information to boot. Detail, Detail, Detail.

Appearance is far too vague.

Theres no personality presented, no race or species, no description on how he looks like. Don't turn out like Darkfire who stopped entirely because he couldn't take criticism and get better from it. If you want to truly make an "awesome" profile, add as much depth and creativity as possible.

Imagine it, Envision it, Create it.


Thu Oct 02, 2008 12:48 pm
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Instead of sitting on the couch watching Saturday Morning Cartoons while creating a bio for a character, take your Goddamn time with it.

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Thu Oct 02, 2008 7:00 pm
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My mind asploded

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Thu Oct 02, 2008 7:58 pm
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Sheer.

f***.

Awesomeness.


Fri Oct 03, 2008 5:34 pm
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Mr. Eh? wrote:
Sheer.

f#%$&.

Awesomeness.

I hope that was sarcasm... >,>

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