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Name: Ryan Minicry Justice

Codename: The Rookie

Race: Human

Age: 26

Appearance: Mostly wears dark brown camo outfit which can be hard to see in dirt surroundings and dark places. Mask that matches the outfit with gloves designed to keep broken or fractured fingers together. Shoes designed to climb rocky areas. Alternate costumes consisting of other camos for snow, desert, sea and metal. Right leg with a pouch for a small knife used for CQC. Left leg with a 9mm with a suppressor. As for the face, young looking face. Brown eyes with black hair. Hair style is like wild looking hair. Normal weight and height for his age.

Background: His mother was one of the many people massacred in his town when he was 7 years old. His mother and him managed to escape, but unfortunately they ran into enemy patrols. His mother begged the terrorists to let Ryan go and kill his mother. The terrorists did just that, they told the boy to run and as Ryan ran as far away as he could, he heard his mother scream out Ryan's name and a bullet sound was heard after that. When he ran, he fell and was covered in mud, crying in misery, he heard one of the terrorists that killed his mother say "Ready or not, here we come!". Ryan stopped crying and did not move, unable to move in fear. The terrorists searched but could not find him. After they left, Ryan knew one way to survive is by camouflage and started to blend with the environment. About a month later, he was rescued by the commander of the army called "Silverwind", an army used to stop terrorists attacks. After training for a couple of years, he was sent in for actual missions. One mission nearly got him killed. He was held up as a hostage, trying to obtain the plans which was his mission. After his teammates recklessness trying to get Ryan back, Ryan got his leg cut off. Later after the mission was complete, he got surgery for a new leg. Now he does missions by himself. Accepting a mission that was told he might not come back from, still accepted and got close to his goal right away. What he did not discover was the only one enemy that stood in his way between the goal, his father. Ryan refused to fight his only father but that nearly killed him when his father was nearly merciless, and stuck Ryan with 3 knifes in his back. After much thought of why his father would do such a thing, he was forced to fight his father. Ryan wasn't proud of what he had done, killing his only father. From then on, he still thinks about that one mission that hurt his body, and feelings.

Still needs improving.

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Sat Aug 23, 2008 1:59 am
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Well, everything's pretty good up until the bio, which seems like it could use a good amount of work on. It's a shaky story. It's got some grammatical mistakes in it, too. Try and make the words flow better.

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I will :nod: I made this during the night and I was pretty tired. :sweat:

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Sniper308 wrote:
I will :nod: I made this during the night and I was pretty tired. :sweat:

Oh great, excuses.

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Well let's see you make something at 3 in the morning. :eew: I'm usually dead asleep at 12.

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Well let's see you make something at 3 in the morning. :eew: I'm usually dead asleep at 12.

I take that challenge.


As soon as I get home tonight, it will be 3AM, so I'll be sure to come on and make a character.

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Good and if it turns out good, I'll eat my hat *Holds up a black hat with white stripes on it*

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Then you're probably going to want to skip lunch, because I heard that toppers are pretty filling.

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Good and if it turns out good, I'll eat my hat *Holds up a black hat with white stripes on it*

You'll be eating said hat.

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We shall see! :snack:

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Um... Stepson... You may have to eat said hat. You swore. :sweat:

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If I lose! :wee:

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Yeah. Belth's going to win. he NEVER sleeps. He's immune to fatigue after years of glueing his eyes open, and secksing Jiggehpuff all night mirite?(ROFLMAOLOLCAUSEISTILLALMOSTCALLEDHIMASHE.HADTOEDITIT.)

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Well you can't just make one at 3 in the morning, it also has to be good! ;)

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Battousai wrote:
Yeah. Belth's going to win. he NEVER sleeps. He's immune to fatigue after years of glueing his eyes open, and secksing Jiggehpuff all night mirite?(ROFLMAOLOLCAUSEISTILLALMOSTCALLEDHIMASHE.HADTOEDITIT.)


Translation: He doesn't tire out. Which Jiggehpuff lieks.

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