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H.A.I.T. #487 (Humanoid Automaton Incapable of Thought) 
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Name: H.A.I.T. #487 (Humanoid Automaton Incapable of Thought)

Appearance: a 6'5" robot with a human-like structure with a lightning shaped insignia across
his left shoulder and a black and grey metal body. The word H.A.I.T. is imprinted in red
on the right side of his chestplate.

Weapons of Choice: a 5 foot sword with a retractable laser on the end and a grappling hook
with a tazer on the end along with an onboard targeting system and built in radar.

Origin: He was created as one of the Lightning Overlord's Rod of Death (L.O.R.D) Corporation's personal law enforcement officers, but was wired differently than the other automatons. Unfortunatly the man who built him was murderd shortly after his creation, which set off a trigger switch in his motherboard that gave him some form of human emotion and a burning desire to destroy the leader of L.O.R.D and free the Arzanon galaxy from his tyranical rule.

Traits: Doesn't understand humor or sarcasm and is very handy as a pilot, but if there isn't anything in it for him, he won't help unless persuaded to. strong enough to lift 700 pounds without breaking under the weight.Also can be upgraded to suit the needs of the battle.

Personality: quick to anger if insulted, but otherwise calm and calculating. Has an immense hatred of other H.A.I.T. units and the scientists who create them. wishes he were a human so that he could relate to them in a personal way.


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Wed Aug 15, 2012 11:28 pm
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Nitpicks:
How tall is the H.A.I.T?
How huge is "huge"?
And if he's incapable of thought, why do you have to persuade him to do stuff?

Just nitpicking.

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^This, each section is also pretty short don't you think?

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Hypersmiley wrote:
^This, each section is also pretty short don't you think?


Yeah. Just look at the other profiles to improve, my friend.

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Terra wrote:
Nitpicks:
How tall is the H.A.I.T?
How huge is "huge"?
And if he's incapable of thought, why do you have to persuade him to do stuff?

Just nitpicking.


#487 "gained some form of human emotion" so in order for him to care about helping, persuasion is necesary.

also added height and sword length to first post.


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I see. So for all intents and purposes he's human in emotion?
Anyway, I'm not seeing a lot of personality. Is he nice, rude or other?

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fixed it to include a personality. thanks for the suggestion Terra.


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You did better than me though, mine Is HORRIBLE. In fact I really should redo It.

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Why was he wired differently from the others? Could you give a reason?

Other than that, not bad.

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