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I never got around to posting that Winter Break story... Or Summer Break...or starting up the -BONUS CONTENT- from last year kiki gave me...

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Just for some narrative clarification, is Alice supposed to be so erratic right now? I thought the whole point of her profile update was to note that she had greater control over Phora affecting her emotions? I just feel like the recent Alice posts have indicated a lack of control? If it's intentional and a plot point, cool, but if it isn't, please remember that there has been character growth between the first book til now. Ex: Evelyn is a little less prickly.

Don't worry about editing the post or anything, but Miss Rachel and the rest of the other characters will still react accordingly.

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Well she's suuuper happy to be around her trusted comrades again, and I don't see why someone would put effort into ruining the whole "bundle of sunshine" thing. Mostly she's been working towards keeping herself from causing trouble - she's not out to kill Phora's part of her soul!
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Well she's suuuper happy to be around her trusted comrades again, and I don't see why someone would put effort into ruining the whole "bundle of sunshine" thing. Mostly she's been working towards keeping herself from causing trouble - she's not out to kill Phora's part of her soul!
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Ah, I see now. Coolio

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KP I deleted your post. You know very well that I expect better from you and have seen much better from you.
You can read through the posts again and then try again to submit an appropriate response, but if I see a lash out like this again, I will kick you out.

I am very disappointed.

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It's in character?

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It was poorly written, poorly portrayed and incredibly bad RP etiquette. I was shocked and quite frankly very displeased.

Again I leave the option up to you, either rewrite an appropriate post or I'm kicking you out.

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It wasn't poorly written :c
I wrote new one
I know you're looking to get rid of me might as well do it

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Your new one is much better and I'll allow it to stay.

However there are a number of issues that remain:

1) I explicitly stated that there are no one-hit kill moves.
2) Conversely, one cannot counter and block all the moves of the enemies, that is for me to decide unless I state otherwise.
3) Alice, a seasoned leader, veteran of the SDU and current co-president, just rushed into battle without any plans. This is not a believable behaviour for Alice, based on her profile and what we've seen in the early chapters.

Take these things into consideration for future posts.

Lastly, I don't take kindly to you assuming that I want to get rid of you. I have appreciated you as a person and a player, and I am not so childish as to push you out with petty arguments. If I want to cut someone out, I will cut them out.

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I thought it seemed that everything was going according to plan?
Well whatever edited.

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