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My First RP *Updated* (Now with locations!) 

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My First RP *Updated* (Now with locations!) 
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I'm not making a specific character, this is just an idea that came to mind please read over and give feedback.

In the distant future of 2048, there lived an evil cyborg named Regnalis von Kernster. Regnalis wants to get revenge on the two scientists that made him this horrible incarnation of man, so he influences common housebots into joining him, and plans to assasinate the two labritorists, Dr. Melavenae and Dr. Ael. (Pronounced "L") Turns out that Dr. Melavenae is long gone and perished in the deep depths of space. Regnalis doesn't know this until he and his robots storm into Melavenae's lab and finds an old article Melavenae herself made. It states: "I will soon make a venture to outer space in search of the cure for the virus I have implanted into Regnalis, the Cybortian Mutator. The only reason I have done this to him was because of the evil schemes he has made. May I die, 2 robots will activate in turn of this, Gear and Trek. If they find out that Regnalis is still making nefarious plans, even after my death, the only way to stop him is to have these robots excecute him."
Regnalis smirks at the article, crumbles it up, and throws it on the floor. Regnalis then heard footsteps. Metallic footsteps. Out of the shadows of Dr. Melavenae's lab come Gear and Trek, their saber arms at the ready. Regnalis sends the newly assembled robots at Gear and Trek and they are easily taken down. "It will take more than a gang of 2 robots to stop me!" Regnalis claims, as he sets his sights on Dr. Ael.
Gear and Trek take note of their defeat, and soon set out to form the greatest robot army the world of Simalior has ever seen and plan to take Regnalis down at all costs.

So basically, the robots (you all) will get to join one of the three armies. Regnalis' army of evil and revenge, Trek's army of slackers and laid backs, or the more serious and hard working armies, Gear's army. The first two members to join the RP will each be a leader of an army. (Gear's is already taken by me.) The other members will be robots of an army. As you being a robot, you can betray Gear or Trek and join Regnalis, as long as you are not found out and excecuted. We (The leaders)bcan slay anyone (Whether if it's with reason or just out of pure hatred). You can conquer my, Trek's or Regnalis' part of territory depending on how many robots you send out in an area and whether or not they are slayed. Wrong choices can have you lose land, right choices earn you land.

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Sefir: A city of gold. Everywhere your eyes can see, there it is. Because of the riches here, military is high ranked. Although only robots usually appear here,this is Trek's base.
Trilopod: A swampland on the far east of Simalior. Overrun by humans, they fight for survival in Rengalis conquest. Buildings are gone, but many armies can be formed. Fighting skills in this place are better thanks to the stealthy environment. (Though, there are creatures that use this stealth as well, and they can prove deadly!)
Cryxon: The Outcast's hideout. Overrun by humans, this city is all for the survival. People here either take orders, or they don't. Stealing and crimes are common here.
Rangtost: Rengalis' main base. This city used to be a lavish, and peaceful one, until Rengalis conquered it. Evil scatters this city from all sides. Humans are only seen here as servants of Rengalis.
Simalior: Gear's base. Humans and robots both overrun this city, and it is the only place that truly poses a threat to Rengalis. Thanks to Gear's leadership skills, the army here is known for its great defense.

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Mon Dec 21, 2009 10:26 pm
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Sounds like the plot to a bad megaman rip-off.
Good job!

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Tue Dec 22, 2009 1:45 am
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He has Dr. Cain in it, it's a Megaman (or more like X) fan RP.

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Tue Dec 22, 2009 9:06 am
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WarPandaXI wrote:
He has Dr. Cain in it, it's a Megaman (or more like X) fan RP.


Wait, what? I never played X. I didn't know there was a Dr. Cain in Mega Man. :( Guess my idea is rubbish then.

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Tue Dec 22, 2009 1:57 pm
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Well, I think that was his name... Anyway, you could just change his name.

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Fixed! And a unique name too!

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Not bad... I'm a newb RPer.

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Yay or nay, Speedtrap?

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Well, i'm off to make a decent robot bio... Also, that would be a "yay" from me, but I dun wanna be Trek, as I prefer to be my own characters.

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Ohhhh! You just sparked an idea in my head WarPanda. The neutral race called, "The Outcasts" They do whatever the hell they want and can be whatever the hell they want. In this race, you can be a Human, Robot, or Android (A human looking robot). Thanks WarPanda!!

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Huh, that race would seem perfect for my character...

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Hmmm... Interesting.

YAY!

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Ok, so now its official for me. I just need to work out this darned recruitement system. Help please?

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Recuitement system? Like, bios?

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Yes, I think I'll make it like having you make a bio for what you want to look like, and what army/race you're in. Just make sure that you state that you're participating in my RP.

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