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Iam starting my own sprite gallery :smile:

OCs: show
First, this unnamed character of mine:
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Another OC:
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Video Games Characters: show
And Master Higgins:
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Cuphead:
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Mon Jan 27, 2014 8:09 pm
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Master Higgen's seems too round, and the toes are shaped strange. The head looks almost nothing like the original character's, and the axe should be tilted sideways. The shadings a bit off on the right too. The OC's pose is strange, as the left foot should not be facing that way if the right is in that angle. The hands are really weird for a fighting stance, facing that way. The bandana isn't shaded, and the body seems to be thin under the arms. also, altogether the shading is strange.


Mon Jan 27, 2014 8:13 pm
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It is an alright attempt, but Clubby mentioned most of the criticism. Especially about the shading. Specifically the OC's pants.

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Mon Jan 27, 2014 8:50 pm
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It is an alright attempt, but Clubby mentioned most of the criticism. Especially about the shading. Specifically the OC's pants.

Sorry, whats OC?


Mon Jan 27, 2014 9:11 pm
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Theshen10 wrote:
Sorry, whats OC?

OC = Original Character. Your character is an original creation of yours, thus Original Character.

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Mon Jan 27, 2014 9:23 pm
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AkumaTh wrote:
Theshen10 wrote:
Sorry, whats OC?

OC = Original Character. Your character is an original creation of yours, thus Original Character.

Got it, Ill be working on Master Higgins. Im trying to do CupHead


Mon Jan 27, 2014 9:32 pm
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Update: Cuphead:
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I like it :^) . But the gloves, the handle and the left leg could use some more shading. Also, the shoes look weird.

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Mon Feb 03, 2014 4:09 pm
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Update: Cuphead:
[ Image ]

What...
The body is obviously just a flip with slight changes, causing the whole thing to look much lazier. The body's angle is awkward, and the arms look way too short compared to the legs. The other leg has no shading, even though the pants above it does, and the other foot shouldn't be facing behind him. The head is pretty good though.


Mon Feb 03, 2014 4:24 pm
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Clubby Bear wrote:
Theshen10 wrote:
Update: Cuphead:
[ Image ]

What...
The body is obviously just a flip with slight changes, causing the whole thing to look much lazier. The body's angle is awkward, and the arms look way too short compared to the legs. The other leg has no shading, even though the pants above it does, and the other foot shouldn't be facing behind him. The head is pretty good though.


The sprite is based on his current design:
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I mean thats the way its done the character


Sat Feb 08, 2014 2:36 pm
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The shading is still weird on your sprite. Also, the pants make it so if you did make a full animation it'd look super awkward.


Sat Feb 08, 2014 2:38 pm
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I didnt make the character itself...
The character was created by StudioMDHR, for a game called CUPHEAD, which is going to be released this year:
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I just create the sprite Ive done


Sat Feb 08, 2014 3:03 pm
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I know. Your sprite still has weird shading and the pose isn't spot on.


Sat Feb 08, 2014 4:07 pm
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I know. Your sprite still has weird shading and the pose isn't spot on.

What do you mean by spot on?


Sat Feb 08, 2014 4:10 pm
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It means that your sprite's pose is similar to their's, but yours is a bit more awkward because it looks like he's leaning back.


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