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i also Didn't shade the other ball in his hands... you may wanna do somthing about that.
Also the color choice that I did was a bit poor and was unclear what you wanted. I only wanted show an example.
Didn't think you'd actually use it, but it is okay if you do since its not mine.

You may wanna do a different color choice for the balls, screen and shoes.

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You have to convey which hands and feet are in front more clearly. If you noticed, Sukapon's left (our right) hands and feet are much darker than the right ones (our left). That says that it's in the background compared to the front ones.

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Well that took long enough...

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It's definitely a lot better, just a lack of shoulders and inconsistency in thigh thickness. Just some quick tweaks here and there.

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Much better fix the right arm.

Now it time for your next step; Shading. For now pick 2 colors and shade this guy.

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Much better fix the right arm.

Now it time for your next step; Shading. For now pick 2 colors and shade this guy.


Uhm, technically it is shaded. Just not correctly.

Enfin, before we get ahead of ourselves. I made this skeleton of your sprite (more specifically, I made it over your sprite);
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If you look at it, can you name the problems yourself Reix? If not, you want me to feedback it for you?

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I also made one with more pronounced shoulders.

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The arms are still pretty long and the right leg isn't attatched to the hip properly (refer to Damian's skeleton mockup) but overall it's better.

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And then EYE.
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Well...

It appears I've been forgotten...

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Lmao start a new project, I don't think you can improve on it much more.

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Lmao start a new project, I don't think you can improve on it much more.



I've still got EYE to crit, along with the other three customs I made earlier.
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Reix wrote:
IronClad wrote:
Lmao start a new project, I don't think you can improve on it much more.



I've still got EYE to crit, along with the other three customs I made earlier.
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Do you ever learn from any critique tossed? I still see a few mistakes from your previous sprites


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Michael M wrote:
Reix wrote:
IronClad wrote:
Lmao start a new project, I don't think you can improve on it much more.



I've still got EYE to crit, along with the other three customs I made earlier.
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Do you ever learn from any critique tossed? I still see a few mistakes from your previous sprites



These are the earliest customs, and I never got any decent critique on these.

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Critique is just saying what it should be
unless it's not human you could probably apply previous critique to the other sprites

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