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Author:  That One Sage [ Sun Apr 15, 2012 4:47 pm ]
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Hello and welcome to my journey to become an artist of pixels and all.

Will update with spritober challenge stuff soon...


day 1: show
Image
Robot Reaper!

Author:  Cactus [ Sun Apr 15, 2012 10:35 pm ]
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The right arm for both characters are a bit floppy and look dislocated from the body, especially the first one, and the hair is a little flat and robot-like. The 2nd one's left leg is thicker than the other one, same with the right foot, if that's just because of the angle it's ok, but....look into it. The 1st one's left arm looks a lot smaller than the other one as well.

But other than that, and the lack of shading that is not needed right now, they're getting there, keep at it.

Author:  That One Sage [ Mon Apr 16, 2012 4:38 pm ]
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Thanks, man. I'll keep these things in mind when I make other sprites.

Author:  iliqnpich [ Tue Apr 17, 2012 7:05 am ]
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add nire cilours for the sprites.think goku's sprite is make like yours?BTW you can edit them and them re-post them on ur first reply.

Author:  That One Sage [ Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:23 pm ]
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I've been improving a little, but I can't post my works yet. Expect an update next week.

Author:  Steven [ Sun Jun 10, 2012 10:20 am ]
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Leviathan wrote:
I've been improving a little, but I can't post my works yet. Expect an update next week.


I'm looking forward to it.

if you're still in the King of Fighters groove, then could you try Rugal sooner or later?

Author:  That One Sage [ Sun Jun 10, 2012 12:49 pm ]
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Damian wrote:
Leviathan wrote:
I've been improving a little, but I can't post my works yet. Expect an update next week.


I'm looking forward to it.

if you're still in the King of Fighters groove, then could you try Rugal sooner or later?

Sure. I'll give Rugal a go.

Author:  That One Sage [ Wed Jun 13, 2012 12:45 pm ]
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Added a WIP sprite of one of my OCs, Twilight. Rugal is next. Any other requests?

Author:  Steven [ Wed Jun 13, 2012 1:39 pm ]
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Oh good, you've gotten better at proportions! The sprite looks nice, I would suggest adding a bit more of a chin to the head though, and perhaps work out the arms more, so that the elbows are more clear (by perhaps, adding more mucle to the upper arm, you could give that a shot).

Looking forward to Rugal.

Author:  That One Sage [ Wed Jun 13, 2012 1:56 pm ]
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Steven wrote:
Oh good, you've gotten better at proportions! The sprite looks nice, I would suggest adding a bit more of a chin to the head though, and perhaps work out the arms more, so that the elbows are more clear (by perhaps, adding more mucle to the upper arm, you could give that a shot).

Looking forward to Rugal.

Thanks for the C+C, Steven.

Author:  Suli [ Wed Jun 13, 2012 5:00 pm ]
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It's looking a lot better than the first two, that's for sure. I would look a bit more into color and the outline, I s'pose, but it's a huge improvement.
Character reminds me a bit of Regal from ToS, though.

Author:  luckycrime [ Thu Jun 14, 2012 8:42 am ]
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It's ok. Try to fix the lining pixel by pixel. It might help get the results you want.

Author:  That One Sage [ Thu Jun 14, 2012 8:46 am ]
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Thanks for the comments. I'm gonna try and update every week.

Author:  That One Sage [ Sun Jun 17, 2012 6:28 pm ]
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Sorry for the double post since it isn't an update, but I have a problem. I can't sprite hands or waists correctly. All of my sprites are coming out bad because of it. Any tips on drawing hands and waists?

Author:  Steven [ Mon Jun 18, 2012 5:22 am ]
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Leviathan wrote:
Sorry for the double post since it isn't an update, but I have a problem. I can't sprite hands or waists correctly. All of my sprites are coming out bad because of it. Any tips on drawing hands and waists?


Kickstarting problems with hands are best solved by using a lot of reference (even sprited ones). Sometimes it's better to sprite each finger seperatly.

Waists are a matter of anatomy. Some styles don't pronounce the difference between the male and female waists that much, but it's always handy to keep it in mind. Usually it's just a progress of trial and error tho, so don't give up. And if you are really lost, post it here so we can help you pinpoint the possible problems.

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